tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8544960147798868772.post3937231730511220356..comments2024-02-09T11:32:39.949-06:00Comments on Hobo Camp Review: David M MortonHobo Camp Reviewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02899709589742173788noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8544960147798868772.post-87514024451670479542013-07-05T12:52:12.758-05:002013-07-05T12:52:12.758-05:00Once again you have proven yourself to be a word m...Once again you have proven yourself to be a word master. Certain phrasing "to be wife" "changed unworldly" "zipped down" slightly turned to perfect fit an unsettling tale. I was so caught up, hoping the he wouldn't kill the possum, especially after the safety was on, I had to remind myself that it was a story. The ending is beautiful. At first I thought Joe was dying, only later thinking he was feeling his dad dying, "Then it let go." (of course it's very open to interpretation)and the last line - perfect. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06899907066249794540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8544960147798868772.post-34599018270043413622013-06-29T16:47:23.668-05:002013-06-29T16:47:23.668-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Tracy E. Hieatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14689528637769414442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8544960147798868772.post-79711675421181709932013-06-29T15:57:33.823-05:002013-06-29T15:57:33.823-05:00This story is a trippy Davy tale. It's very mu...This story is a trippy Davy tale. It's very much you, but different from your others in its surreal qualities bordering on metaphysical in a trippy way.<br /><br />I like your word choices and imagery and how I get drawn in to something that might happen. It is something you do with your stories that often end on a thought.Tracy E. Hieatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14689528637769414442noreply@blogger.com