tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8544960147798868772.post7924420930764080236..comments2024-02-09T11:32:39.949-06:00Comments on Hobo Camp Review: Seth MurrayHobo Camp Reviewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02899709589742173788noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8544960147798868772.post-67443423948279091032013-07-05T13:09:30.510-05:002013-07-05T13:09:30.510-05:00The image of the "giant carp following his li...The image of the "giant carp following his limp body" all the way to the sea has stayed with me for days. Great thoughtful imagery. Also like how you added so much color to the scene under the bridge with caramel, silver, rubies and diamonds, giving it the specialness of the man's memories. Love the phrase "the invisible hand of a child grown". But it's the contrast that gets me. The certainty of "A shared headstone" and "the town he never left", against the suddenness of a spring flood and his body, followed by the giant carp, traveling all the way to the sea. Beautiful, well done, piece.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06899907066249794540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8544960147798868772.post-25524179390949467742013-06-29T16:47:58.285-05:002013-06-29T16:47:58.285-05:00Lovely poem, Seth.Lovely poem, Seth.Tracy E. Hieatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14689528637769414442noreply@blogger.com